Feedback - Legacy of Duality

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Feedback - Legacy of Duality

Postby Snag » Wed Apr 01, 2009 3:31 pm

For any comments you lot may have about the story named above in the subject line.
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Re: Feedback - Legacy of Duality

Postby Paint Scribe » Tue Apr 07, 2009 6:19 pm

I enjoyed it. I think it captured quite a bit of the Ven. though there is something inherently disturbing about twin siblings being lovers and bearing children.... but then I suspect that is the point of this one. You pull it off well.

thank you for sharing.

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Re: Feedback - Legacy of Duality

Postby alexanderthesoso » Wed Sep 01, 2010 3:37 pm

They would still be in danger of letting slip taht we yet live." typo

i like it. They got some goals accomplished, tricked the entire world, and left on their own terms. Also, as created creatures, i really don't see the issue with sibling mating, myself. Not quite the same genetics, yes no?
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